Video Link:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zIef-SwaqYs&feature=youtu.be
I found that the feedback that was most useful to me from the last pitch was how I was very nervous and became flustered. For this time, I did keep notes in front of me so that my words wouldn't overlap and give the impression that I was unprepared and sloppy. I was nervous again and did have a slip up on my words but I feel that this time was much better than last! Thank you!
Hi Jenna,
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